Following Walden
Walden went to the woods
And so will I,
To watch the time and birds
Just float me by.
I will sleep on a tree
Or in some cave,
And with my life the way
To heaven pave.
I will write songs on trees
With twigs and nuts,
And drink the sap oozing
From the bark’s cuts.
I will bathe in rivers
Lashing with pebbles,
And in doing so create
Rippling rebels.
I will dig, I will fill
And lie on earth.
I will hide, I will walk
And savour my mirth.
One day I will pass on
Across the cloud,
While my body lies in
A moist leafy shroud.
10 Comments:
Is being a dreamer a precondition to being a poet ;)
The poem reflects one's desire for sylvan peace...it begins to weave a dream which is broken a little too soon I feel...if dream is that u intend to portray and not the breaking of it u should weave it like it could never come to an end...:)
hmnn. somewhere it reflects a kinda defeatist atitude..poem ending shud have been a little different
end may seem jus too abrupt, but all the same, me like it jus this way :)
i know i can go on and on with it. in fact i want to. however the MBA course does not afford me this luxury of time - at least not now. Maybe I'll take it up later :)
Apne khaatir Mehal banaya,
Aap hi jaakar jungle soya
- Kabirdas
Just as others said, this one needs more effort. You need to go on with the rhythm...
-- Akshaya
i would say that ur imagination is beautiful and very natural..in simple words u have ben able to express a nice story...
Ah, my favorite poet is at it again!
I am assuming you mean Throeau's "Walden"? Would love to know your views on it.
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