Monday, September 26, 2005

Consummation

The bangles made lustrous sounds
And engaged me in a tuneful shine.
Her hairs whisked past like fruity silk
Through the breathing fingers of mine.
Her temples throbbed for alms of love,
So I touched every sighing place;
And finally we tasted the warmth
And murmur of love's embrace.

29 Comments:

At 1:34 PM, Blogger Braveheart said...

I would really like it to go on a little further at least, so that the rhyme settles into the listener's heart completely :)

-- Akshaya

 
At 10:40 PM, Blogger Tom Naka said...

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At 11:34 AM, Blogger Braveheart said...

Parth, I have blogrolled you. Also, there's a new poem on my blog. You may want to read it before it sinks below the other posts :)

Waise in that case, you can check my poetry blog!

-- Akshaya

 
At 2:23 PM, Blogger Kai gurl said...

Parth...i love the way u weave words together. They fit so well that another alternative doesn't seem to exist.

visited ur blog after a long time. Missed ur comments on my blog.

 
At 12:17 AM, Anonymous priyangini said...

hi parth, I have no words to describe the beauty of your poems. they are just perfect. I myself am no poet, not even close, but I do have a blog and a variety of posts so if you have the time, do visit, i may not guarantee beutiful poems but I do guarantee a smile.

And ya, i came in thru braveheart's blog.

 
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At 3:02 AM, Blogger Tanushree said...

Hey, still being the bard I see.

 
At 7:53 AM, Blogger Raj said...

Very touching, nostalgic feeling to it..

 
At 10:23 AM, Anonymous Bewra Kekra said...

By god ki kasam aap to ustaado ke ustaad hain, SIR JI!

 
At 10:31 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Parth,

and only now i see the link between the anguished hand and anguished heart. what sublimities lie in your incomparable verse! you have revealed my innermost insides.
marry me!

LilacLayla

 
At 9:10 PM, Blogger herenow said...

first visit..interesting poem:) from lets say an interesting person!!:-P

 
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At 9:24 AM, Blogger Illusionary said...

very nice poem.What does thouched mean though?

 
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At 6:19 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Beautiful poem,
U certainly seem to have been fed on The Romantics, and the Metaphysicals...:P
But please, correct "thouched"..:P
hehehehheh

 
At 3:55 AM, Blogger Parth said...

Thanks all for the encouragement and the generous words! :)
Akshaya, long time since motichoor ke.. C'mon i want more stuff to read and love :)
kai_gurl, priyangini, herenow, illusionary i've been thru ur blogs and left comments. do read n reply.
laylaa, a lil more info wud help :)
Raj, time for some cheer in ur poems :))

 
At 5:51 AM, Blogger mistyheavens said...

the synesthetic feelings are very well evoked...you seem to blend the senses really well to give quite a memorable experience...much like having a delectable rosagulla..when the taste just lingers on...

 
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