Consummation
The bangles made lustrous sounds
And engaged me in a tuneful shine.
Her hairs whisked past like fruity silk
Through the breathing fingers of mine.
Her temples throbbed for alms of love,
So I touched every sighing place;
And finally we tasted the warmth
And murmur of love's embrace.
posted by Parth @ 6:53 AM
21 comments
21 Comments:
I would really like it to go on a little further at least, so that the rhyme settles into the listener's heart completely :)
-- Akshaya
Parth, I have blogrolled you. Also, there's a new poem on my blog. You may want to read it before it sinks below the other posts :)
Waise in that case, you can check my poetry blog!
-- Akshaya
Parth...i love the way u weave words together. They fit so well that another alternative doesn't seem to exist.
visited ur blog after a long time. Missed ur comments on my blog.
hi parth, I have no words to describe the beauty of your poems. they are just perfect. I myself am no poet, not even close, but I do have a blog and a variety of posts so if you have the time, do visit, i may not guarantee beutiful poems but I do guarantee a smile.
And ya, i came in thru braveheart's blog.
Hey, still being the bard I see.
Very touching, nostalgic feeling to it..
By god ki kasam aap to ustaado ke ustaad hain, SIR JI!
Parth,
and only now i see the link between the anguished hand and anguished heart. what sublimities lie in your incomparable verse! you have revealed my innermost insides.
marry me!
LilacLayla
first visit..interesting poem:) from lets say an interesting person!!:-P
very nice poem.What does thouched mean though?
Beautiful poem,
U certainly seem to have been fed on The Romantics, and the Metaphysicals...:P
But please, correct "thouched"..:P
hehehehheh
Thanks all for the encouragement and the generous words! :)
Akshaya, long time since motichoor ke.. C'mon i want more stuff to read and love :)
kai_gurl, priyangini, herenow, illusionary i've been thru ur blogs and left comments. do read n reply.
laylaa, a lil more info wud help :)
Raj, time for some cheer in ur poems :))
the synesthetic feelings are very well evoked...you seem to blend the senses really well to give quite a memorable experience...much like having a delectable rosagulla..when the taste just lingers on...
Great work guyz!
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